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Blurb: Dever believes he has made the steal of a lifetime. Unfortunately, no one wants to fence an artifact from an evil goddess known for ritual murder and betrayal. Now, Dever needs to rid himself of 'Sarryn's Heart' before those who are searching for it find it - and him. One small problem. The artifact is alive and has its own ideas of what it wants to have happen.

I'm looking for five 1st round readers to read and give feedback on this novel. It is about 65,000 words of traditional fantasy. If dark ritual magic, morally ambiguous characters with personal codes of ethics and a high body count bother you, please don't volunteer.

This feedback is for the STORY ONLY. Not only will my mom be doing the main editing (because she always does), I will eventually have a professional editor take a whack at it. I'm looking for logical fallacies, plot holes and confusion points if something is not explained enough.

Please volunteer ONLY if you believe that you will be able to get me feedback on the novel within a two to three month timeframe. Thanks.

Volunteer by commenting or emailing.

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mouseferatu
Nov. 12th, 2007 06:51 am (UTC)
I fear I don't have the time to volunteer, but I wanted to take a moment to say that I think it sounds like a really cool book. Even though I can't do so now, I'd love to read it at some point. :-)

(In published form, preferentially.) ;-)
cuddlycthulhu
Nov. 12th, 2007 03:26 pm (UTC)
Sorry, that last anonymous post was me. Firefox has been logging me out of LJ at random, mysterious times. 8(
strixluna
Nov. 12th, 2007 03:53 pm (UTC)
Gah, how on earth did I manage to lose your email. I'd be honored to read if you'd want me to. And story problems are something I love to poke at :)
seabelle
Nov. 12th, 2007 04:52 pm (UTC)
I'd be thrilled to read it as well if you'd be OK with that?

Cybele
celedraug
Nov. 12th, 2007 05:16 pm (UTC)
I could manage this. *grin*

ivan23
Nov. 12th, 2007 06:05 pm (UTC)
I'll be happy to help if you need more.
mamapduck
Nov. 12th, 2007 07:54 pm (UTC)
I'm game. :)
sy4
Nov. 13th, 2007 01:38 am (UTC)
ready if you are
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