Jennifer (gaaneden) wrote,
Jennifer
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Final Decision...

... on the story Disposable Clothes for In the Buff.

"Hello Barbara,

The edited story is attached. As the original story
was autobiographical and I was adding in fictional
elements, I made the following changes:

- Renamed the protagonists to Joe and Susan
- Retitled it to "Playing Rough"
- Dropped all references to anal play
- Added a light pussy caning scene

Thanks!
Eden"

It is possible that they will ask for more edits or reject it now if they don't like the changes. But, I'm satisfied now.
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